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A Fright night what-if fanfic

In this fanfic Amy lives next door to Jerry Dandridge instead of Charlie.

Basic plot: Jerry is messing around with Amy's mind while he is waiting for a dress to be made.

Sunday:

Amy is in her room tutoring Charlie while he keeps trying to make out with her.

"Your mom is working the night shift c'mon!"

They have a fight and Amy tells him to leave. (needs more work)

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Monday:

Billy sees Amy coming home from school while he is mowing the lawn and tells Jerry about her. Jerry drains a female victim that he or Billy invited in for some reason. While they are getting rid of the body, Jerry asks Billy to get a seamstress/tailor to make a custom-made dress that will take two weeks to make.(needs more work)

Tuesday:

Charlie drops Amy off at her house after they were finished studying at his house. While he walks with her to the porch, Amy apologizes for getting angry the other night, while Charlie apologizes for being impatient. Charlie walks Amy to her front door, then goes back to his car. Amy's mother introduces her to Jerry and she shakes his hand. Jerry Dandridge eventually leaves and Amy finds out that Jerry was there to leave a poster for a missing dog named Max(?).

Amy awakes later that night to see Jerry standing at the edge of her bed. Amy nervously backs against the headboard as Jerry slowly pulls back the bed cover and sits on the far end of the bed. He reaches forward, taking her hands gently, then begins to pull her slowly toward him. Their fingers interlace as he begins to kiss her.

Wednesday:

When she awakens the next morning she simply assumes what happened last night was some weird dream and simply ignores it. During lunch Amy is in the cafeteria nervously tapping her pencil and reading a book. Charlie joins her at the table. (needs more work)

Jerry appears in Amy's room late at night again and brushes his fingertips against her cheek waking her. Amy suddenly sits up, holding the bed sheet in front of her. She gradually relaxes, lowering her hands as Jerry stares into her eyes. Jerry moves his hands toward her chest and begins to untie the front of her nightgown. Amy places her hands on his and he stops, moving his hands away. After a few seconds Amy continues to take off her nightgown. Amy closes her eyes, breathing heavily as Jerry rests his hand on her chest, feeling her heart beat.

Thursday:

Amy considers telling her boyfriend about the dream she had but feels guilty. Charlie asks her to the Teen night dance at Club Radio next week.

(needs more work)

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Friday:

Amy tells Charlie about her dreams and asks him to stay over for the weekend to watch her while she sleeps to find out if these dreams are really dreams or not. Charlie is worried about her mother finding out but Amy says her mother is going out of town for a business meeting for the weekend. Amy doesn't have any unusual dreams during the nights when Charlie is watching her. (needs more work)

Monday:

Jerry comes back that night to Amy's bedroom and surprises her after she comes out of the shower. Amy backs up against her desk as Jerry walks toward her. He hoists her up onto the desk and slowly removes her towel. Amy trembles with fear as he looks at her body and crosses her arms in front of her chest. Amy's eyes widen as he leans forward, kissing her. She begins to relax and lowers her arms, resting her hands flat on the desk. Amy opens her eyes again, surprised when he starts to French kiss her. Jerry moves his tongue back after a few seconds, allowing her to reciprocate. Amy guides her tongue timidly at first, then probes her tongue deeper into the man's mouth. Jerry pushes Amy's tongue back and moves his lips over to her neck, causing her to sigh softly. She feels a wave of pleasure moving through her body and smiles, having never felt anything like this before, even with her boyfriend. She opens her eyes when something clicks in her mind.

"This is wrong! I have a boyfriend!"

Amy picks up a pencil from the desk and stabs Jerry in the shoulder blade while he is kissing her neck, causing him to jump back. He pulls the pencil out and glares at her. He moves to the window and opens it, then transforms into a bat and flies out the window. Amy faints and wakes up next morning on her bed wearing her nightgown, relieved that it was just a dream. While walking to the bathroom she steps on a pencil lying on the floor and now isn't sure whether it was a dream or not. (needs more work)

Tuesday:

Charlie notices that Amy has been staring at her pencil all day and talks to her about it during lunch.

Wednesday:

Thursday:

Sometime during the week:

Amy says that the dreams are getting worse and after talking about it with Evil and Charlie, she decides to hire Peter Vincent to perform a vampire test on Jerry to put her mind at ease. Charlie drives her to the studio and she asks Peter Vincent to help her. After she pays him $500, he agrees to help. Peter, Charlie and Amy discuss the details at a table. Charlie phones Jerry and tells him about their idea. Jerry agrees and tells them to come over on Friday. (needs more work)

Next Friday:

They go to Jerry's house. Charlie reassures Amy before they go inside that he has a cross just in case Jerry really is a vampire. Jerry is upstairs admiring the work that was put into the making of the dress for his intended bride. He hears Billy call him and walks downstairs to introduce himself to his guests, shaking their hands. They go into the living room and Amy watches pensively as Peter Vincent gives Jerry the holy water. She is relieved when Jerry drinks the holy water and nothing happens. After they leave, Charlie drops Evil off at his house, then drives to Club Radio with Amy to go dancing during "Teen night" to help take her mind off the whole thing. After a few hours of dancing they stop, Amy goes to the bar and orders a coke while Charlie goes to make a phone call to Evil Ed. Amy finishes her coke and gets off her stool coming face to face with Jerry. Their eyes lock, gazing at each other for a few minutes. Jerry smiles at Amy, taking her hand gently. Amy is nervous but feels strangely compelled to go with him. The bartender points Jerry out to a bouncer, who intervenes. A fight breaks out between Jerry and a couple of bouncers. Charlie hears someone in the crowd scream while he's on the phone with Ed and turns to see the crowd quickly parting as the body of a bouncer slides lifelessly across the dance floor. Charlie sees Jerry walking away with Amy at the other end of the bar and runs after them, leaving Ed on the other end of the phone.

"Charlie what's going on? Why are people screaming? Hello? Hello?"

Charlie gets stuck in a stampede of people that are trying to run to safety. When Jerry and Amy get to his jeep he looks into her eyes again, commanding her to sleep. Amy resists for a few minutes, trying to tell herself to look away. Eventually she loses consciousness and Jerry helps her into the passenger seat of his jeep. When Charlie finally gets out of the club, he runs to his car and finds that all of the tires have been slashed. (needs more work)

***

Amy awoke at Jerry's house on his bed, still groggy from the mental suggestion he gave her. She started blinking repeatedly, allowing her eyes to come into focus. As she panned the room she saw her clothes neatly folded on a chair and looked down to see she was wearing a white halter dress. While she continued to pan the room she caught sight of Jerry standing in front of a fireplace with his shirt unbuttoned. Realizing she was in danger she quickly got up and ran to the door, averting her eyes to keep herself from looking at Jerry. She tried to open the doors but they were locked. Amy's heart started beating faster when she heard Jerry approaching. She closed her eyes, trying to fight his influence over her, praying that Charlie would get here in time to save her.(almost finished)

***

Charlie arrives at Jerry's house to confront him. Jerry starts backing up the staircase, pretending to be afraid as Charlie holds a cross in front of him. When Charlie gets to the top of the staircase, Billy Cole hits him on the back of the head, knocking him unconscious. Amy is pacing back and forth nervously, stopping when she sees Jerry walking in with Charlie slumped over his shoulder. Jerry drops Charlie onto the floor jarring him awake and Amy rushes over to his side. Amy reveals to Charlie that she is a vampire by turning her head and pulling her collar aside, showing him where Jerry bit her. Amy starts sobbing and Charlie hugs her tightly. She explains to Charlie that Jerry brought her here because she's the reincarnated form of his lover Hestrith. Amy points to a painting of her on the wall.

"Ever since he bit me, I've been having flashbacks, memories of her life with Jerry."

Amy breaks the door open after Charlie points out that because she's now a vampire, she also has a vampire's strength. (needs more work)

Amy orders Billy Cole to get out of her way which causes Billy to consider his options. He knows Jerry will be very angry if he hurts Amy, but he also knows he has to protect Jerry while he sleeps. Amy orders Charlie to stay by the staircase leading up to the cellar door, just in case. Amy tears off his arms, gets head butted by Billy Cole, then rips off his head. Amy stares surprised at Billy as his body dissolves. Amy breaks a leg off of a chair in the basement and opens up Jerry's coffin. She is about to kill Jerry when she collapses to the floor in pain. Jerry hears the commotion and wakes up, leaping out of his coffin. Jerry runs over to Charlie, taking him hostage and orders Amy to drain him. He turns Charlie's head, exposing his neck to Amy as she slowly gets up. (needs more work)

Ending # 1 - (Jerry and Amy's ending) Amy succumbs to the hunger and bites Charlie's wrist, then tells him to leave. Amy drinks enough to satisfy her hunger but not enough to kill Charlie. Charlie climbs up the stairs leading outside. Ed goes over to Charlie's and then to Amy's house to see if either of them made it home safely after hearing about a murder at the Club Radio. While at Amy's he hears a crow cawing and looks over at Jerry's house, noticing Charlie lying on the ground next to the cellar door.
(needs more work)

Ending # 2 - (Charlie and Amy's ending) Amy sits down, keeling over and clutching her stomach in pain, refusing to drain her boyfriend.

"UNNGGH….I WON'T DO IT!"

Charlie asks Jerry to look at Amy and the pain he's causing her, convincing him to release her from this curse. Jerry walks up to the cellar door and turns to take a last look at Amy. He then turns to Charlie.

"Please take care of her Charlie."

Jerry walks into the sunlight, freeing Amy to be with Charlie.
A second rough draft of a Fright night fanfic I'm working on. If you read it please tell me what you think of the progress so far.

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I remember this story from fanfiction.net.  It made me check you off as my favorite author.